2007年考研作文题是场足球赛，射门球员和守门员在关键时刻都把对手想象得过于高大，以至于自己很渺小。 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should o 1) describe the drawing briefly, o 2) explain its intended meaning, and then o 3) support your view with an example/examples.
How enlightening and compelling the above drawings are! 1 A football-player is prepared to kick a ball towards the net, where a goal-keeper keeps guard. However, in the player's mind appears a scene in which the keeper becomes a giant covering the net completely, while the latter imagines that he turns out to be a dwarf standing below the huge net 1. In such a simple way the author 2of the drawing has managed to arouse public awareness of the essentiality of self-confidence.
The implied meaning conveyed by the drawings should be taken into account seriously. With the development of the economy, self-confidence is admired and highlighted in every country and every nation 2, la3ck of self-confidence, on the contrary, is generally regarded as irrationality. First and foremost, there is no doubt that no issue is as helpful as self-confidence to build up4 a harmonious society. In addition, if we lack of self-confidence, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated about the future. As we know, Qian Xuesen, the father of Chinese ART (incorrect use of the article. Of the Chinese…article is required) missile program，has said that self-confidence is significant to us. Therefore, it can be safely concluded that self-confidence plays an indispensable and irreplaceable role in our life and work.3
Since many of the philosophic principle PLU(error in singular/plural form. principles) we adhere to are abstracted from the ART (the article is not required here) daily life, it is easy to find that CUT(this word is not required here) examples in the world around us. The idea illustrated in this picture is no exception. For instance, Zhang Haidi, the new president of China Disabled Persons Federation, writes in her newly published book （HOPE）, that self-confidence is the footstone of success.4 In fact, everyone has surely seen similar evidence of this truth in the POW (poor word selection, their) own life. Only when we pay close attention to it can we finally accomplish the noble goal of a harmonious society.5
1. Technically this statement is not incorrect, but consider better ways to express this.
2. "author" refers to written works..revise the term.
3. the lack of self-confidence,...
1. Excellent! Well done. A very good summery.
2. Excellent word choice. An impressive statement.
3. Excellent! Well done.
4. Excellent word choice. An good example.
5. Excellent word choice. An excellent conclusion.
A very good piece of writing. I am impressed with your interpretation and creative thinking. Your essay is well structured and you provide very clear and distinct examples to support your view. There are minor grammar errors which I have marked and you should review them. The most significant impression you left me with, was the originality. I enjoyed your work, well done!